Besides the element of Voice, a strong sense of SETTING can give the reader a strong impression that a real person is behind the written word. The reader should be connected to each scene by offering her a place to look around and observe. <\/p>\n
While I write this post for my website, World So Bright, I\u2019m stationed in the cleanest most attractive laundromat I\u2019ve ever encountered. The chrome on every machine shines. The doors on the new dryers sparkle. The floor is swept the walls, and walls are painted perfectly. Take a breath, it smells like clean laundry in here. That\u2019s for sure. This establishment is nestled in the small town of Centralia, a marvelous town with both history and heart. Yep, that\u2019s where I am as I write to you.<\/p>\n
Your memories are connected to locations. Where were you when you realized your parents were lovers? Or where did you sit and daydream about your future life as an adult? For me, that was on the school bus. I preferred to sit on the right side of the bus next to the window, I could see far across the farmland of Paradise Road, just south of Houghton, Michigan. While the school bus was the setting for daydreams, the kitchen sink was the setting for reviewing my memories. A full sink of dishes was the right amount of time, to remember a scene from my younger motherhood days, and became a valuable activity before I recorded them. <\/p>\n
So also, you are likely sitting somewhere as you remember and write the next chapter or scene of your memoir project. Anchoring yourself and your story in real places makes you accessible to your readers. They wash dishes too! <\/p>\n
Anchoring your story in a place is as easy as the \u201cfront end\u201d of one sentence. Here\u2019s an example, <\/p>\n
\n\u201cI had just come from the market with a week\u2019s worth of croceries, tired and sweaty, when. . .\u201d<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n
Let\u2019s call our setting \u201canchor\u201d a SETTING TAG.<\/p>\n
Think of the power of a Setting Tag. It can establish the mood, the tone, and the emotional level of a moment in time. What we choose to describe should be something important or symbolic at that moment.<\/p>\n
SETTING TAG + PERSONS present + DIALOGUE <\/p>\n
Here\u2019s an example, <\/p>\n
I dragged myself into the house, arms full of groceries. I set down my keys when my husband came up beside me and said softly, \u201cWe just got a call from your mother. Donny passed away in the night.\u201d\u00a0<\/p>\n
Note that what was spoken is presented within quote marks. <\/p>\n
Certainly, the next element to include will be your immediate reaction. The impact or the effects of what was said may be felt until today. <\/p>\n
So now we have: SETTING TAG + PERSONS present + DIALOGUE + REACTION<\/p>\n
Let’s take it a step further. Heavily charged situations contain backstory. Personal interactions both negative and positive are rooted in the history of those persons present. Even the location has walls that remember! So, it\u2019s possible the recipe of this scene may include a FLASHBACK.<\/p>\n
SETTING TAG + PERSONS present + DIALOGUE + REACTION or FLASHBACK + Transition back to the memoir\u2019s TIMELINE<\/p>\n
The question arises \u201cHow do we trust that what we remember are the exact words that others or ourselves have spoken?\u201d In the world of creative nonfiction, if the quote would be considered reasonably his or her statement, you may place the quote marks there.<\/p>\n
So, what do we have so far? We have a Setting Tag, mention of persons present, quoted dialogue, emotional reaction or impact, flashback history, and the narration that holds it all together.<\/p>\n
Adding SETTING TAGS to scenes and memories in your memoir project will ground or anchor the story in real places making your story more believable. They should believe it because it’s true.<\/p>\n
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